Something I noticed
you made me bleed
I saw you girl
eating me
Red you painted the night
all wrapped in cold sin
You waved till next time
Veil is your face
the one of a thief
You gave me a prophecy
into this dream
Something I heard
flesh and bones smashed
I heard you girl
devouring me
You raped the night red
All pale as the dead
You waved till next time
Fatal is our bond
more than I could bear
Your teeth rattle
as I vanish
We came in night red
All wrapped in a mask
It was death and birth
I burrowed through the night
Red, all raped in your mask
I waved till next time
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I always appreciate the imagery and feelings you evoke in your gripping poems.
These lines ~
“Red you painted the night
all wrapped in cold sin
You waved till next time”
Then, coming full circle, with the speaker waving “till next time”
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I am so happy you read it and liked it!!! Thank you so much for your kind words, always!!! ❤
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You are welcome. Keep writing. 😀
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What an interesting contrast of violence, colour, and then “Till next time.”
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Thank you for the comment and kind words ❤
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Welcome!
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This is a powerful poem. To me the insight of dreams telling us what we may not see in the daylight. To see behind the mask, the veil. So wondeful for you to use poetry to work through emotions. I’ve always felt that writing was a healing process for me. Thank you for sharing your work. May you inspire others to do the same. And as you mentioned in your bio, that the practice of writing for them also will turn into a passion as it did for you.
Many blessings to you, Dear One.
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I agree with you. The subconscious is a very strange and powerful thing. It comes in our dreams in many forms. Thank you so much for reading and for your support!! I really like to make my dreams and feelings into poems… Wish you the best ❤
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Great Pen! 👏🏼 Amazing imagery. 💯
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Thank you so much!!! ❤
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Amazing 💖
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Powerful and intriguing.
Brilliant 👍🖤
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Thank you so much!!! ❤
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You’re most welcome 🖤
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Powerful words shared by a talented writer.
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I loved your work today. This poetry torn to the core and you made the reader feel every word. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
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I am really so happy to hear these beautiful words from you!!! Really I’m so glad you liked it!!! Thank you so much dear friend ❤ ❤ ❤
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I did enjoy my friend and you are welcome.
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