Twilight moments

lady wearing a coat in an abandoned building
What lies behind closed doors
What lurks out of the window
The truth left to be told in between;
Here it comes, the hardest time of day
slowly, grievous the sun goes down
What a painful sight to engulf our eyes
Now blind as well we hear it clear
from the depth
I hear it breaks
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7 thoughts on “Twilight moments

  1. You’ve made a moment of quiet heartbreak deeply sensual… bottomless in its quiet beauty.
    You’ve given it a voice that taunts the challenge of standing there.
    Necessary, resonant, relevant…
    and brave.

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    1. Thank you so much again for your kind words!!! ❤


  2. Another amazing poem….”from the depth…I hear it breaks”….this line is sitting deep in me.

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      1. You’re very welcome, my friend ❤️
        Thank you for letting me share your poem…here’s the link :

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  3. Bravo! Love this line – “The truth left to be told in between”
    Sometimes the “truth” is elusive and there are often many ideas of what that is.

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    1. I totally agree with you! Thank you for your kind comment Michele!! ❤ ❤

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