October 24, 2020Vall.Grey poetry7 Comments

Twilight moments

lady wearing a coat in an abandoned building

What lies behind closed doors
What lurks out of the window
 
The truth left to be told in between;
 
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Here it comes, the hardest time of day
slowly, grievous the sun goes down
 
What a painful sight to engulf our eyes
 
Now blind as well we hear it clear
 
from the depth
I hear it breaks

7 thoughts on “Twilight moments”

Woodsy October 24, 2020 — 6:13 pm

You’ve made a moment of quiet heartbreak deeply sensual… bottomless in its quiet beauty.
You’ve given it a voice that taunts the challenge of standing there.
Brave.
Necessary, resonant, relevant…
and brave.

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  Vall.Grey poetry October 24, 2020 — 7:12 pm
  
  Thank you so much again for your kind words!!! ❤
  
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Navin October 24, 2020 — 8:26 pm

Another amazing poem….”from the depth…I hear it breaks”….this line is sitting deep in me.

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  Vall.Grey poetry October 25, 2020 — 6:58 pm
  
  Thank you dear friend!! ❤ ❤
  
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  1. Navin October 26, 2020 — 12:08 am
    
    You’re very welcome, my friend ❤️
    Thank you for letting me share your poem…here’s the link : https://navinspoetry.com/am-i-the-only-one/
    
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Michele Lee Sefton October 24, 2020 — 9:56 pm

Bravo! Love this line – “The truth left to be told in between”
Sometimes the “truth” is elusive and there are often many ideas of what that is.

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  Vall.Grey poetry October 25, 2020 — 6:59 pm
  
  I totally agree with you! Thank you for your kind comment Michele!! ❤ ❤
  
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