Vall.Grey poetry18 Comments on My slayer

My slayer

a mood board containing pictures about the color red and a poem named My Slayer
 Something I noticed
 you made me bleed
 I saw you girl
 eating me
  
 Red you painted the night
 all wrapped in cold sin
 You waved till next time
  
 Veil is your face
 the one of a thief
 You gave me a prophecy
 into this dream
  
 Something I heard
 flesh and bones smashed
 I heard you girl
 devouring me
  
 You raped the night red
 All pale as the dead
 You waved till next time
  
 Fatal is our bond
 more than I could bear
 Your teeth rattle
 as I vanish
  
 We came in night red
 All wrapped in a mask
 It was death and birth
  
 I burrowed through the night
 Red, all raped in your mask
 I waved till next time

18 thoughts on “My slayer”

  1. Michele Lee December 12, 2020 — 7:59 pm

    I always appreciate the imagery and feelings you evoke in your gripping poems.

    These lines ~
    “Red you painted the night
    all wrapped in cold sin
    You waved till next time”

    Then, coming full circle, with the speaker waving “till next time”

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      Vall.Grey poetry December 13, 2020 — 6:18 pm

      I am so happy you read it and liked it!!! Thank you so much for your kind words, always!!! ❤

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      1. Michele Lee December 13, 2020 — 6:54 pm

        You are welcome. Keep writing. 😀

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  2. V.J. Knutson December 14, 2020 — 2:44 am

    What an interesting contrast of violence, colour, and then “Till next time.”

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      Vall.Grey poetry December 14, 2020 — 9:20 pm

      Thank you for the comment and kind words ❤

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  3. the_tovarysh_connection December 14, 2020 — 3:58 pm

    This is a powerful poem. To me the insight of dreams telling us what we may not see in the daylight. To see behind the mask, the veil. So wondeful for you to use poetry to work through emotions. I’ve always felt that writing was a healing process for me. Thank you for sharing your work. May you inspire others to do the same. And as you mentioned in your bio, that the practice of writing for them also will turn into a passion as it did for you.
    Many blessings to you, Dear One.

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      Vall.Grey poetry December 14, 2020 — 9:28 pm

      I agree with you. The subconscious is a very strange and powerful thing. It comes in our dreams in many forms. Thank you so much for reading and for your support!! I really like to make my dreams and feelings into poems… Wish you the best ❤

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  4. R|CARDO. December 17, 2020 — 12:31 am

    Great Pen! 👏🏼 Amazing imagery. 💯

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  6. Little Charmer January 5, 2021 — 12:42 am

    Powerful and intriguing.
    Brilliant 👍🖤

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      1. Little Charmer January 5, 2021 — 9:35 pm

        You’re most welcome 🖤

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  7. johncoyote January 8, 2021 — 11:45 pm

    Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
    Powerful words shared by a talented writer.

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  8. johncoyote January 8, 2021 — 11:46 pm

    I loved your work today. This poetry torn to the core and you made the reader feel every word. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.

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      Vall.Grey poetry January 9, 2021 — 12:27 am

      I am really so happy to hear these beautiful words from you!!! Really I’m so glad you liked it!!! Thank you so much dear friend ❤ ❤ ❤

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      1. johncoyote January 9, 2021 — 12:30 am

        I did enjoy my friend and you are welcome.

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