Odd people, I see them everywhere They look through me, as if they know Wrinkled brows and empty eyes Oh nurse, they talk to me! I see my past and all my future in their old lazy hands And oh, how we look alike How much we suffer Oh nurse, I see him in them, but now these brains they’re burning in guilt Their weathered face, bothersome There’s no time to turn away when weakness came to be my strength, I find it easy to despise them But I only know the truth Somewhere, inside out of place that all I see in their reflection, It’s a reminder of her deadpan face Come nurse, it is time your sugar coated pills will blow my mind And I hang on every inch I’m mesmerized, I’m drowned Fed of their double face skin Oh please listen, I hang on him! Two brothers, two sisters of mercy Who left me in there, choked in tears? When absence came to be reality my loss was covered in wet arms Oh nurse, you better come Whimper to whimper I lost sense thinking I knew myself Oh nurse what’s wrong with me? Thinking I see what I can’t touch Tempting as it is to walk away Run feet run! turn into ash
Wow, I love your style 🙏🏻💕
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Thank you so much ❤ ❤ ❤
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I really admire your poems, they are so well written. You have a special gift with words. I tried to live comments but for some reason they won’t upload. There might be a glitch or something. Thank you for your comment ❤
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Thanks so much for letting me know, there was a problem with jetpack, I changed the plug in so should be working now 🙏🏻💕 you also have a gift, your work is a joy to read. Thank you for Being ☺️
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❤ ❤ I'm really grateful for your kind words! Also sorry for my English is not perfect cause it;s not my native language… I'm glad to leave comments for you. Wish you best!!
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That’s even more impressive if it’s not your native language. I couldn’t write in another language that’s for sure! I think it gives you a really fresh and interesting way with words ☺️
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Vall, this poem of yours blew me away…intense & deep imagery…thank you for sharing the link of this breathtaking poem on IG ✨❤️💫
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Thank you so much dear Navin!! You are always so supportive, I’m grateful🙏🏻✨❤
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You’re welcome, dear Vall…I love your poetry…so pls keep expressing in your unique style ✨❤️💫🙏
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Thank you so much… I really am glad… ❤
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