Vall.Grey poetry19 Comments on Mistake

Mistake

a black and white picture of a sad face looking down
 Fill me up with your delusion
 Drink me up with your tongue
 Beware, out  there at the nest
 a poisonous trap,
 mine is cunning and sharp
  
 Now you see, you are stained
 too much excitement
 too much of loss
 Regrets prowling unspoken, sadly
 my mind filled up
 all trapped inside
  
 And I did not die
 Yearning a second time
 I did not live, no
 Cursing the moment
 Skin of mine
  
 Tell me why
 and tell me how
 Tell me why you did not
 leave in the moment of bloom
  
 “We are not to blame for the unseen”
  
 Do not move, do not ask
 Atonement appears before us
 Brave you will be, in a heart of a slave
 Steady and real
 A reckless girl
  
 “You are not to blame for the unseen”
  
 *
 He was another kind
 a troublesome kind of sweet
 But not today
 Not today
  
 With memory blank
 you lose your tongue
  
 tonight;

19 thoughts on “Mistake”

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        Vall.Grey poetry January 8, 2021 — 9:48 pm

        Good day to you too!! And happy new year ❤

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      1. Little Charmer January 8, 2021 — 9:54 pm

        Not at all my friend.
        Thank you for yours!! 👍🖤

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  3. ivor20 January 9, 2021 — 12:56 am

    Intriguing poem Vall, and thank you for following my blog/website, I appreciate your interest in my poetry, I hope you enjoy reading my humble writings, and I’m from Geelong, Australia. Cheers. Ivor.

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      Vall.Grey poetry January 9, 2021 — 10:45 pm

      Hi Ivor, it’s very nice to meet you!! It’s my pleasure to read your writings and to follow your blog!! I am from Athens, Greece! Have a good day, and happy new year ❤

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      1. ivor20 January 9, 2021 — 11:02 pm

        I look forward to reading your writings too. 😀

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  4. Michele Lee January 9, 2021 — 3:30 am

    Dramatic and captivating. I cannot choose a favorite stanza – I like them all! 🖤

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      Vall.Grey poetry January 9, 2021 — 10:47 pm

      I’m so sooo glad you like it ❤ ❤ Thank you soooo much!!!

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      1. Michele Lee January 9, 2021 — 11:41 pm

        You are welcome. I always enjoy your poetry – your voice.

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  6. Sunra Rainz February 23, 2021 — 11:16 pm

    This is both gorgeous and mysterious 💕

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      Vall.Grey poetry February 24, 2021 — 2:05 am

      Thank you for reading and the comment!! 🙏🏻💕

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