Vall.Grey poetry14 Comments on Κόκκινο

Κόκκινο

Here is a Greek poem that I wrote recently, and immediately I thought of translating it in English. Thank you for your support, even though I’m kinda lost and out of inspiration lately. I wish you all a joyful summer ❤

A mood board containing the Greek poem of Vall Grey called "Red"

Translation (English):

The crimson line, separates us
in the middle, thin and clear
at her sight, I rave

I lay my body, on her
wounded and grey

And a voice
faded,
Breath faint
it shakes the structure

And the voice
whispers,
freedom;

14 thoughts on “Κόκκινο”

  1. Hobbo August 16, 2021 — 11:11 am

    A lovely translation.🙂

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      1. Hobbo August 17, 2021 — 7:19 pm

        👍 You are welcome!

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  2. kenhallettblog August 16, 2021 — 1:29 pm

    Fine work, Vallia!✨
    And good to see you posting, again.
    (I missed you.)

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  4. Michele Lee August 17, 2021 — 4:02 am

    Wonderful to see a post from you. I hope all is well. This poem creates many intriguing images. I love it and the ending is fantastic.

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      Vall.Grey poetry August 17, 2021 — 6:17 pm

      Dear Michele, thank you for your kind words once again. I’m really glad you like it!! Wish you the best 🙏🏻💖

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  5. Navin October 24, 2021 — 11:16 am

    Oh wow….so beautifully expressed….

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  6. Eeta December 26, 2021 — 11:56 pm

    I love everything about this poem and yes when I write poetry it is psychotherapy for me too.

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      Vall.Grey poetry January 23, 2022 — 10:59 pm

      Thank you so much about your comment ❤ I am so glad you like it and understand 🙏🏻✨

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